I spent a bit more time on this one today and I think the right side is working a bit better now. I simplified the background behind the flower by lifting some darker color and then painting a lighter value. I also darkened the petal centre and tips to better show the light. The blossom looks much more alive!
I had a bit more time to putter and I spent it on “Sheaves” which I’ve renamed “Counting Sheaves”… I bumped up the value difference on some of the elements… little stuff really, but it makes quite a difference in how I feel about the piece. The main thing was some negative painting behind the top left sheaf to make it pop a bit more but I also decided to emphasize some small dots and squares across the piece. They help to bridge lights to darks. It feels done to me now.
I like the name “Counting Sheaves” because it fits well with my agricultural roots [farmers are always counting something!] and my early career as an accountant… enjoy!
I really enjoy following your process. And it makes me feel better to know that someone that I admire continues to tinker with a painting after it's put together. I love your work!
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