Last time I listed some issues with this painting:
- reintegrate and add interest to the top right shape
- resize the intervals on the left side
- take a proper photo [last time I took it at night with artificial light]
After referring to my viewfinder design [small image above], I added the small slices in the top triangle and the central shape. I also added a curvy wedge shape to the top right to make that shape more interesting. I missed the boat on that bottom shape – too many lines and it’s too big but I will live with it for a while before I make any more changes. Enjoy!
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